Mizuki Konoujou-Quest(no spoiler as of now)

[milkyboon]

Image google it and be prepared for porn! At least that is what happened to me last time I did it.

This is a quest about Mizuki Kanoujou, although I didnt asked daisy yet, but I dont think it will do any harm posting my ideas first. (thus this is subject for editing and etc)

Event 1(EM-1)
Requirements : Walk in Magmell streets and have cash of more than 5000G.
Game requirements: All OK!

As you walked around the Main Street of Magmell, a person dressed in a cloak walks up to you. His big hat conceals the face and you can only see the hands.
Mysterious Person : Hello, friend. Mind buying some good stuff? Interested?
PC: Well, lets see what you got.
Person : I actually have this "Love Potion X" (quest item). Since its a good day today, I will throw in a discount of 50%! It will be at a price of 5000G!
PC: Buh! Thats freaking expensive!
Person: Ah! then I will throw in a free collar, how bout it? Its a specially made collar that induces instant orgasm on the wearer! Of course, it is included with a remote control! Special Spherian Technology to top it off!


(B-1)
Choice A: Buy it.(leads to B-1a)
Choice B: Decline and leave.(leads to B-1b)

(B-1b) You decided not to buy it and return home.
End

(B-1a) You decided it is worth the money and bought it.

Mysterious Person: Thank you! Have a nice day!

He began to walk away into the crowd of people, disappearing.

Slave: Woah! Thats a special collar isnt it?
PC: Yeah! I bet its gonna be fun to be used! But more importanly I got the Love potion! Muahahaha!(laughing is optional)

(In the background)
The person took off his cloak.

Image:
danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/857731/black_hair-blue_eyes-kousaka_kyousuke-male-necktie

Mysterious Person: Sigh... Glad that is taken care off.

(Back to PC)
PC: (Heh, I am the ultimate Eros in this game, Muahahaha)
You laughed all the way down the street and suddenly
"Kyaa!"
Apparently you bumped into a girl and she fell on the floor.
She seems to be wearing a hooded red cloak concealing her face and body, but also revealing her naked thigh and hands.

danbooru.donmai.us/post/show/852163/alternate_costume-breasts-brown_eyes-brown_hair-cl

PC: Are you okay? Little Red Riding Hood?
She seems to ignore your question, looking left and right as If she is being chased by a ghost. Her hands shivering and she seems to be short of breath.
She looked at you and saw your guild crest hanging on your attire.
Looking in front of you, you saw a dozen ruffians spread out and rushing towards your direction.
PC: (...are they looking for this girl?)
Girl: He-Hey. You are a guild member right?
PC: Yea, I guess.
Girl: Then borrow me a collar quick!
Without hesitation you gave her the collar you just bought. She quickly grabs it and wear them on her neck.
"Please save me."
As she stood beside your slave, two ruffians came, wearing a (red armband), you instantly recognise it as the <insert faction here>.

Ruffian1: *panting* He-hey, did you see a girl with red cloak run off in this direction?
Ruffian2: She is like 170 cm tall, and have a DRILL hair.
Ruffian2: Offuhh~!
You saw a boot attached to Ruffian1's crotch area, falling the moment you saw it, and somehow you are very sure it was not supposed to be there.
*Ruffian2 falls down in great agony*
You realised
Ruffian1: Hey! That girl looks like the one we wanted!

He pushes you to the side, trying to get a better look at the girl.
PC: Hey, watcha doing?(You push him backwards)

Ruffian2: You... sure its her?
Ruffian1:...
Ruffian1: Maybe not, she's got a collar.
You show them your badge with your nose high in the sky
PC: Im a guild member you know! These are MY Girls!
*Buk!*
A boot hits at the back of your head.
You fall on the floor head first.
Ruffian 1 and 2: ... I think we got the wrong guy. Clean up your own mess btw.

The two guys left to continue their search.

PC: Ku-sooo~~!
Girl: First things first! I am not your girl! Hmmp~! Anyways, thanks for your help. Im gonna go.
PC: Grr...
She proceed to untie her collar.
PC: (Ah yea, I forgot about the remote control... )
With the remote control in your hands, you smile with an evil grin.
Girl: Why cant this collar be taken off?
PC: Free slave day today. Hehehe.
On!
Girl:Kuah!!
She falls onto the floor, apparently her legs bacame weak.
Girl: *twitching in orgasm* Ahhnn... Ahh~!
OFF
PC: Want to try that again? *Grin*
Girl: What have you done!?
PC: It seems that Ero Ero instant cum collar is working.
Girl: What!?
Slave: Master... Ther..There are people looking.
PC: Opps, yeah right. So, let me make a deal, you come with me and I wont do that again... maybe
Girl: How in the world can I trust that maybe!?
PC: Fully trustable!
Girl: =_=
Girl: Damn! Why am I being captured again!?
You gained Mizuki Konoujou!

Quest item 1: Love Potion X!
Description: After drinking, the subject will fall in love with the first person the subject sets his/her sights on.

Comments: Using it will lead to Love Potion X! Event.
Love Potion X!
Condition: use the Love potion X.
Using the usual 'procedure', you pry of the labels of the potion and hand it over to your slave.
You let your slave drink the whole contents of the bottle.
PC: So how do you feel?
Girl: ...
...
Kuah!
Sensing something is wrong, you looked under the bottle only to find the note of
"Effect : Lust +200!"
Suddenly the girl's eye turned red, her face filled with ecstacy.

PC: Opps, this is bad.

(then the WARNING! signal comes out, like you are going to fight the boss in Megaman)

Girl: Master please..! Ahhnn~ Please RAEP me! (wrong spelling intended)
PC: Ah... well, Im... kinda busy.
You back off towards the door, trying to get a quick escape.
Suddenly she vanished and appeared right behind you; blocking your escape!
PC: (Its the Shunpo technique!!??)
She grabs your body with amazing strength that you never felt before!
Girl: Ahhhnnn.... Master~~!
PC: GYAAAHHHHHHH~~~~!!


(You were raped. You lost your (Wo)Manhood. You cannot move until the next day.)
PC: Well, this is a kind of 'love potion'

Quest item 2: Ero Ero instant cum collar!
Description: This collar makes the wearer orgasm with a touch of a button! Apparently the button is on a remote control and has a high percentage rate of being abused. It may have been used for evil purposes by the time you read this.

PS: I have no story for the man yet, and thus subject to speculation. and for some reason I have a feeling this quest will be nice! It has a good setting start!

[flagnine1]

I like it. I was thinking more along the cliche running from her family to escape an arranged marriage thing. but it looks like a good start.

[flashnovice]

I expanded it a bit, milkyboon, as well as correcting some grammar. I started just after the first few lines of dialog.

PC: Buh! Thats freaking expensive!
Mysterious Person: Ah! Then I will throw in a free collar, how 'bout it?
PC: The most expensive collar isn't even 100, let alone the thousands you're asking.
Mysterious Person: It's a very special collar. It can induce an instant orgasm in the wearer on command, with this remote control. Special Spherian Technology!
PC: Tell me more.
Person: It's made of a nearly indestructable material. It locks itself once worn, and once it's locked on, it can't be removed for a significant time, at least 24 hours.


(B-1a) You decide it is worth the money and buy it. (go to B-2)

(B-1b) PC: "Sorry, it's just not worth your asking price."

At the first refusal, I would have it disable the quest for some semi-random number of turns and then offer it again. This is because I may be frantically saving money for something and can't afford a 5K setback at the moment, but don't want to lock out the quest forever. After each subsequent refusal, the number of turns delay increases until finally the seller says "Last chance. I won't ask again."

Alternately, you could have the seller say after the first refusal, "If you change your mind, I can be found at <location> for the next <number of days> or so."


B-2:
Mysterious Person: Thank you! Have a nice day!

He begins to walk away into the crowd of people, disappearing.

Slave: Woah! I've never seen a collar like that. It looks special.
PC: Yeah! I bet its gonna be fun to use! But more importantly, I got the Love potion.

Do you ?
(B-2a) Laugh maniacally. Muahahaha!
PC: (Heh, I am the ultimate Eros in this game, Muahahaha)
You laugh all the way down the street.

(B-2b) Grin knowingly. You daydream quietly about the possibilities and the dangers.


"Kyaa!"
You bump into a girl and she falls onto the floor.
She seems to be wearing a hooded red cloak concealing her face and body, but also revealing her naked thigh and hands.

PC: Are you okay? Are you Little Red Riding Hood?
She seems to ignore your question, looking left and right as if she is being chased by a ghost. Her hands shiver and she seems to be short of breath.
She looks at you and sees your guild crest hanging on your attire.
You look beyond her and see a dozen ruffians spread out and rushing in your direction.
PC: (Who are these guys ? Are they looking for this girl?)
The girl stands up and addresses you.
Girl: He-Hey. You are a guild member right?
PC: Yea, I guess.
Girl: Then lend me a collar, quick!

If you chose to laugh maniacally (B-2a)
Without hesitation you offer her the collar you just bought. She quickly grabs it and applies it to her neck.

If you chose to grin knowingly (B-2b)
PC: (stammering) I've only got this one, but if you lock it on it ... "
She grabs it from your hand before you can finish your sentence and snaps it shut around her neck.
PC: "... you won't be able to take it off for a long while."

Girl: "Please save me."

As she stands beside your slave, two of the dozen ruffians approach, both wearing a (red armband). You instantly recognize it as meaning they are with the <insert faction here>.

Ruffian1: *panting* He-hey, did you see a girl with red cloak run off in this direction?
Ruffian2: She is like 170 cm tall, and has dark hair.
Ruffian2: Offuhh~!
You see a boot attached to Ruffian1's crotch area, falling to the ground the moment you notice it. Somehow you are very sure it was not supposed to be there.
*Ruffian2 falls down in great agony*
You realize ..
Ruffian1: Hey! That girl looks like the one we wanted!

He pushes you to the side, trying to get a better look at the girl.
PC: Hey, watcha doing? (You push him backwards)

Ruffian2: You... sure its her?
Ruffian1:...
Ruffian1: Maybe not, she's got a collar.
You show them your badge with your nose high in the sky
PC: I'm a guild member in good standing! These are MY Girls!
*Buk!*
A boot hits the back of your head. You fall on the floor on your face.
Ruffian 1 and 2: ... I think we got the wrong guy. Clean up your own mess btw.

Ruffian1 helps Ruffian2 to his feet. They leave to join the others to continue the search.

Your slave helps you as you climb slowly to your feet, rubbing the back of your head. The strange girl recovers her boots and puts them on.

PC: Ku-sooo~~!
Girl: First things first! I am not your girl! Hmmp~! Anyways, thanks for your help. I'm gonna go.
PC: Grr...
She attempts to remove her collar.

B-2a If you chose to laugh maniacally
PC: (Ah yea, I almost forgot about the remote control... )
With the remote control in your hands, you smile with an evil grin.
Girl: Why cant this collar be taken off?
PC: "Free slave day today. Hehehe. On !"
You push the button on the remote control, activating the collar.
Girl:Kuah!!
She sinks to the floor, her legs becoming weak.
Girl: *twitching in orgasm* Ahhnn... Ahh~!
You push the button again, deactivating the collar.
PC: Want to try that again? *Grin*
Girl: What have you done!?
PC: It seems that Ero Ero instant cum collar is working as the seller told me it would.
Girl: What!?
Slave: Master... There..There are people looking.
PC: Opps, yeah right. So, let me make a deal, you come with me and I wont do that again... maybe
Girl: How in the world can I trust that maybe!?
PC: Fully trustable!
Girl: =_=
Girl: Damn! Why am I being captured again!?
You gained Mizuki Konoujou!

B-2b If you chose to grin knowingly.
PC: As I tried to tell you before you put it on, that collar cannot be removed once locked into place, at least for a significant time.
Girl: That's impossible !
PC: That's what the man who sold it to me said, at least.
Girl: What else did he say ?
PC: It came with this remote control, but ...
She tries to seize the remote control from you, but you refuse to relinquish it. In the brief struggle, she accidentally pushes the big red button. She sinks to the floor, her legs becoming weak.
Girl: *twitching in orgasm* Ahhnn... Ahh~!
You push the button again, deactivating the collar.
PC: "He said that using it causes the collar to induce an orgasm in the wearer. It seems he spoke the truth."
Girl: "Whatever can I do ?"
PC: "Look, you can't go around Magmell in a collar but without a master. A slave with no master will belong to whoever can take her. That collar cost me a lot of money, so I can't just let you go with it. You'll have to come with me. I promise not to let those men who were chasing you have you."
Girl: "It seems I have little choice. Damn! Why am I being captured again!?"

P.S. Check the item suggestion thread for two new items.

[milkyboon]

PC: Are you okay Little Red Riding Hood? (The little Red Riding hood was used as a tease by PC towards the girl, so the 'Are you' in front of LRRH is unnecessary.)
She seems to ignore your question, looking left and right as if she is being chased by a ghost. Her hands shiver and she seems to be short of breath.
She looks at you and sees your guild crest hanging on your attire.
You look beyond her and see a dozen ruffians spread out and rushing in your direction.
PC: (Who are these guys ? Are they looking for this girl?)
The girl stands up and addresses you.
Girl: He-Hey. You are a guild member right?
PC: Yea, I guess.
Girl: Then lend me a collar, quick!

If you chose to laugh maniacally (B-2a)
Without hesitation you offer her the collar you just bought. She quickly grabs it and applies it to her neck.

If you chose to grin knowingly (B-2b)
PC: (stammering) I've only got this one, but if you lock it on it ... "
She grabs it from your hand before you can finish your sentence and snaps it shut around her neck.
PC: "... you won't be able to take it off for a long while."

Girl: "Please save me."

As she stands beside your slave, two of the ruffians approach, both wearing a (red armband). You instantly recognize it as members of the <insert faction here>.

Ruffian1: *panting* He-hey, did you see a girl with red cloak run off in this direction?
Ruffian2: She is like 170 cm tall, and has DRILL hair.(The DRILL hair is also meant as a tease on the girl. She doesnt like it to be called as drills but as CURLY hair, so something similar)
Ruffian2: Offuhh~!
You see a boot attached to Ruffian2's (Its Ruffian2 not 1)crotch area, falling to the ground the moment you notice it. Somehow you are very sure it was not supposed to be there.
*Ruffian2 falls down in great agony*
You realize ..
Ruffian1: Hey! That girl looks like the one we wanted!

He pushes you to the side, trying to get a better look at the girl.
PC: Hey, watcha doing? (You push him backwards)

Ruffian2: You... sure its her?
Ruffian1:...
Ruffian1: Maybe not, she's got a collar.
You show them your badge with your nose high in the sky
PC: I'm a guild member in good standing! These are MY Girls!
*Buk!*
A boot hits the back of your head. You fall on the floor on your face.
Ruffian 1 and 2: ... I think we got the wrong guy. Clean up your own mess btw.

Ruffian1 helps Ruffian2 to his feet. They leave to join the others to continue the search.

Your slave helps you as you climb slowly to your feet, rubbing the back of your head. The strange girl recovers her boots and puts them on.

PC: Ku-sooo~~!
Girl: First things first! I am not your girl! Hmmp~! Anyways, thanks for your help. I have to leave(I think this is a more polite[royalty speak] form.
PC: Grr...
She attempts to remove her collar.

B-2a If you chose to laugh maniacally
PC: (Ah yea, I almost forgot about the remote control... )
With the remote control in your hands, you smile with an evil grin as she places her hands on the collar, trying to take them off.
Girl: Why cant this collar be taken off?
PC: "Free slave day today. Hehehe. On !"
You push the button on the remote control, activating the collar.
Girl:Kuah!!
She sinks to the floor, her legs becoming weak.
Girl: *twitching in orgasm* Ahhnn... Ahh~!
You push the button again, deactivating the collar.
PC: Want to try that again? *Grin*
Girl: What have you done!?
PC: It seems that Ero Ero instant cum collar is working as the seller told me it would.
Girl: What!?
Slave: Master... There..There are people looking.
PC: Opps, yeah right. So, let me make a deal, you come with me and I wont do that again... maybe
Girl: How in the world can I trust that maybe!?
PC: Fully trustable!
Girl: =_=
Girl: Damn! Why am I being captured again!?
You gained Mizuki Konoujou!

B-2b If you chose to grin knowingly.
PC: As I tried to tell you before you put it on, that collar cannot be removed once locked into place, at least for a significant time.
Girl: That's impossible !
PC: That's what the man who sold it to me said, at least.
Girl: What else did he say ?
PC: It came with this remote control, but ...
She tries to seize the remote control from you, but you refuse to relinquish it. In the brief struggle, she accidentally pushes the big red button. She sinks to the floor, her legs becoming weak.
Girl: *twitching in orgasm* Ahhnn... Ahh~!
You push the button again, deactivating the collar.
PC: "He said that using it causes the collar to induce an orgasm in the wearer. It seems he spoke the truth."
Girl: "Whatever can I do ?"
PC: "Look, you can't go around Magmell in a collar but without a master. A slave with no master will belong to whoever can take her. That collar cost me a lot of money, so I can't just let you go with it. You'll have to come with me. I promise not to let those men who were chasing you have you."
Girl: "It seems I have little choice. Damn! Why am I being captured again!?"

P.S. : Ahh, I like both of the choices, hahaha! And I kinda underlined my modifications.

[flashnovice]

Hello milkyboon. My comments about your underlined parts would be would be ...
"Drill hair" is not a well-known expression. I didn't know it meant "curly" until you explained it.

"With the remote control in your hands, you smile with an evil grin as she places her hands on the collar, trying to take them off." This sentence should end "trying to take IT off." The collar is singular, not plural.

[milkyboon]

I see. Thanks for the correction, so will this be the final version? before going for the next event? Yea, and I need to discuss with you and daisy as for the future of this girl(serious expression)

Ahh... im still on the otherworld chat, and you are not there.

[irrbloss]

If I may offer my own opinions on this matter:

Firstly, I'm not much sold on the souped-up collar you oh-so-conveniently obtain right before you need it [1]. Partly because you oh-so-conveniently obtain it, but also because, once the collar comes off, I don't see her staying on as your slave (not even if her happiness is high, though that might save you from ending up in a collar, or on the end of a chain). She used to be free and presumably that's rather neat when compared to being someone's slave. A more compelling reason for why she is staying is needed, I think.

Secondly, I'm not aware of any details, but she's presumably referred to as "princess" for a reason. And if she is a princess of the kingdom I don't see her being your slave while her father's sitting on the throne.

Additionally, since Mizuki is unique, I'd prefer to see some more meaningful trigger for obtaining her than merely having enough cash.

So, from these points and the general idea behind milky's encounter, let me sketch the following (clichéd) proposal (working under the assumption Mizuki really is a princess of the kingdom):

The usurper, Mr./Ms./Mrs. X, seizes power is a coup. To eliminate their claims on the throne, X's men hunt the surviving members of the royal family. Mizuki, who may or may not have evaded her pursuers on her own for some time, tries to hide from X's men by pretending to be the Player's slave (maybe after, say, bumping into the Player in the street, with X's men hot on her heels). The Player magnanimously agrees to help her (or throws her to the wolves). When and if Mizuki is hiding in the Player's house, the Player, knowing that Mizuki has nowhere else to go, has the option of starting Mizuki's training (and there should probably be some confrontation with dialogue here).

If there are other princesses, they could be in hiding as well and there could be hints, leads and quests for the Player to follow, in order to expand his/her collection. There could also be an option to sell Mizuki, as well as any other princesses, to Mr./Ms./Mrs. X, who, I'm sure, would pay handsomely.

[1] If you want an orgasm-collar, why not add it as a rare and expensive item to Cat's Paw?

[flashnovice]

I didn't write the original, so I've got no horse in this race. I could see two different collars, one the orgasm collar that milkyboon originally wrote and a time-lock collar that could be used as a plot-device.

[milkyboon]

irrbloss The oh-so conveniently obtained collar was oh-so conveniently given by a man from the future oh-so conveniently conjured up in my mind.
because :
-He doesnt want the princess to go up the throne, because she will make a big mistake in the future and cause a catastrophe.
-OR He wanted her to be safe from the grasp from the four lords who are planning to usurp the throne.
The player would soon realise that there the collar couldnt be made with the current technology.

And stories seem to pop up in your mind eh? Thats speculation for ya. I will allow anyone at anytime to post their thoughts for the event following this quests(coz I dont have much, and it would sound cliched)

[flagnine1]

I am going to have to agree with bloss. you need to find a way to either blackmail her into staying or a way that makes her want to stay. the collar is a bit convenient.