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Post by daisy_strike on Jan 8, 2011 17:19:02 GMT -5
A bunch of new quests and introductions for the February release. As always scenes must pass peer review and my okay. The following contains spoilers.
Futa Scenes
Scene 1A:
Futa Leader introduction, militaristic building an army and is only interested in other futa.
Scene 1B:
Futa Leader speaking to non-futa, telling them to go away.
Quest 1:
Futa Leader wants more recruits bring her combat skilled futas, repeatable
Quest 2:
Futa Leader wants to help relieve the troops stress. She wants Straight slaves with high sex stats. repeatable
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Gentlemen's club
1A
Battler says hi to guys.
1B
Battler tells not guys to get lost.
Quest 1:
Battler wants you to do him a special favor a pair of blondes.
Quest 2:
Battler has a request from a member a pony girl, repeatable.
More of these will probably come.
Daisy
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Post by flashnovice on Jan 8, 2011 19:24:06 GMT -5
A bunch of new quests and introductions for the February release. As always scenes must pass peer review and my okay. The following contains spoilers.
Futa Scenes
Scene 1A:
Futa Leader introduction, militaristic building an army and is only interested in other futa.
Have you heard of me ? If not, you soon will. Futanari make perfect soldiers. I am building a force of them, exclusively. I have no use for other, inferior slaves.
Scene 1B:
Futa Leader speaking to non-futa, telling them to go away.
I have no use for inferior soldiers. You are not a futanari. Begone before I have you forcibly removed.
Quest 1:
Futa Leader wants more recruits bring her combat skilled futas, repeatable
Even of the futanari, not everyone is good enough to serve me. I always seek superior futanari, skilled in the ways of combat. Can you supply such slaves ?
Quest 2:
Futa Leader wants to help relieve the troops stress. She wants Straight slaves with high sex stats. repeatable
A great general once said that morale is the greatest single factor in success. I wish to keep my troops morale high. To this end, I require a constant supply of skilled slaves to satisfy them. Can you procure me such a slave ?
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Gentlemen's club
1A
Battler says hi to guys.
Good evening, gentlemen. Welcome to my club. We offer many different forms of entertainment for well-behaved gentlemen of quality. What can I arrange for you ?
1B
Battler tells not guys to get lost.
My apologies, but we do not offer entertainment for the ladies. I cannot let you in as I'm afraid you would be mistaken for members of the staff. Perhaps a different establishment would cater to your needs ?
Quest 1:
Battler wants you to do him a special favor a pair of blondes.
I understand that you have special contacts among the slave training community. I would ask a special favor. I seek a matched pair of blondes, but I must do so discretely. If you could procure them for me, I would be happy to reimburse you (whatever the amount should be). And perhaps I could return a favor in the future ?
Quest 2:
Battler has a request from a member a pony girl, repeatable.
I have a member in good standing who would like to obtain a slave well trained in pony-mimicry. This member would like to remain anonymous, so I have agreed to act as an intermediary. The payment would be $###. If you can do this, perhaps other members may request a similar service in the future ?
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Post by flagnine1 on Jan 8, 2011 19:55:16 GMT -5
I like them I might suggest changing "forcibly removed" to "killed".
my suggestion for futa quest 1.
"I understand that you cannot join our movement yourself, but perhaps you could bring us recruits, instead. Futas of course and with some training in combat already preferred. I will see that you are rewarded for your service. For the glory of ..." (not quite sure who or what they are fighting for.)
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Post by krezar on Jan 12, 2011 4:54:46 GMT -5
First off, I'll say hi. I've been on the masterbloodfer SM forum for quite awhile, just lurking.
Next up, I'll take a stab at making words happen for you daisy.
Futa Scenes
Scene 1A:
Futa Leader introduction, militaristic building an army and is only interested in other futa.
" As you pass through the rather ornate gates of the [futa army name], you are brought before [leader name]. She (he? It?) has the aura of leadership about her, and the glaring eyes of a person obsessed with a lofty goal. "
" I am [name], and I am not interested in wasting time. My army needs soldiers, and those soldiers must be perfect. If time allowed, I'd train them myself, but that is not a pleasure I may indulge. An army of perfect Futanari will soon rule this land, and I feel your talent would be valuable for that goal. "
Scene 1B:
Futa Leader speaking to non-futa, telling them to go away.
( to follow the first paragraph I wrote for non-futa ) " What rabble has found its way into my fortress? Your kind will NOT pollute my domain, now or ever. BE GONE. "
" As speedily as you entered the fort, you are escorted back to the side street. As the guards throw you to the dirt, they spit profanities regarding you parents, and how awful they must feel having birthed a half-sexed child. "
Quest 1:
Futa Leader wants more recruits bring her combat skilled futas, repeatable
" [name] gazes over a few papers as she speaks to you. " I need soldiers, and I need many of them. They must be Futanari, and they must be warriors of high grade. I set no time limit for you, but I request that you be hasty. The soldiers I have now are busy fighting the pit-beasts and clearing the Green from our home. My plans for this world can not move forward until I can stretch my army beyond those limits. "
" She hands you a small note, with several figures written on it. " " I will of course make this worth your while. And, so that you might not mention these plans to the city guard, a small bonus. 250 Gold pieces, which you can get from my guards outside. Do not betray this trust. You won't earn it twice. Now go. "
"You are escorted to the gate of [futa army], where the guard hands a small purse, stuffed with gold. "
" Don't spend it all in one place, " she smirks."
-if you visit without a suitable futa-
" You are brought before [name], who doesn't seem very amused by your visit. "
[name]'s eyes stare straight through you as she starts to speak, " why are you here without my warrior? If you insist on wasting time, do so somewhere else. Now LEAVE. "
" After her quick speech, you are escorted back to the street, the guards at your heals slamming the gate behind you. "
-Visit with a proper futa (combat skills at whatever lvl )-
" [name]'s working over some paperwork as you are brought before her. She looks up only briefly to acknowledge you before her eye's return to her notes. "
" Good work, [trainer]. My liaison has informed me of your successful work. The slave will be brought here, and she will be indoctrinated into the Futanari Army. The guard will have your fee ready for you at the gate. Come back again, and I will have more work ready for you. "
"As you leave the compound, a guard waves you over, and presents you with a large purse, filled with gold. She smiles before going back to her post, and you take your leave of the Futanari palace for now. "
-When repeating the quest-
" As you pass through the now familiar Futanari Gate, you are met by your previous slave, who now dons a full set of leather armor and a formidable sword kept at her side. "
" This way please, mistress. " She leads you to [name]'s office, where you part ways. [name] calls you in as she scribbles down whatever it she scribbles. "
"Thank you for returning. The Futa you brought me before is well trained and earning her place here in my army, as you have seen. " A slight smile spreads across her face as [name] continues, " I'd like you to deliver another warrior to my army. The same deal stands, and the rewards will be just as sweet. " [name] Hands you a note, and returns to her work. "
" As you leave [name]s office, you are again greeted by your former slave, who happily escorts you back to the main street. "
Quest 2:
Futa Leader wants to help relieve the troops stress. She wants Straight slaves with high sex stats. repeatable
(I'm assuming straight slaves means futa sex slaves. If that's not the case, let me know. )
" You're brought to [name]'s war room, a place you've become quite familiar with. [name] gives you a glancing smile while she goes over some plans. "
" Ah [slavetrainer], I am quite happy you stopped by. Our efforts to increase our army are most fruitful. However, I'm encountering a new problem, one of which you should be most familiar with."
" [name] brings you to the window overlooking the main barracks. " Look, [slavetrainer]. My army stands ready, yet their faces show me a different story. They look, how should I put it... Pent up. They need Release. And I have decided that you will help with this. "
"As [name] hands you a note, she explains, " My army needs sexual release, but NOT with those half-sex whores wondering the brothels. I need pure Futanari, trained in the ways of pleasuring their own kind. The job of bringing those Futa to me is yours. Please make haste, as my ever expanding army needs more than food and water to hold strong. "
[name] Laughs as she slaps your shoulder, as she walks you to the hall. The guards outside wish you good travels as you leave the [futaarmy] grounds, a new request ready to be filled. "
-Coming back without the proper slave-
" As you are escorted to [name]s office, you feel eyes crawling over your body. The camp is on edge, and they all expect you to have their relieve for them."
" [name] looks at you, a slight amount of disapproval on her brow. " I was expecting you to have a new slave with you that my Futa could enjoy. Why have you come back without one? " The question hangs only for a moment before she continues, " I will over look this mistake, but do not do it again. I have little patience for those who waste my time. "
" As you leave the Palace, the guards look disappointed, obviously hoping they'd be serviced tonight. "
-Returning with proper slave-
( First paragraph from last entry here )
" [name] takes leave of her notes and maps for a moment to welcome you into her office. " I trust you come bearing good news? "
"You give [name] the paperwork for the slave you've trained, and wait as she pours over it. [name] looks up, obviously happy with what she has read. "
"Good" she explains, " She'll do nicely. Thank you for your hard work [trainer]. Your pay is with the guards at the gate. I look forward to working with you again. "
-On repeat quest-
" The guard escorting you to [name]'s office seems to have a slight spring to her step. You can only guess that she had her way with the slave you brought here last time. "
"[name] calls you in, " Ah you've returned [trainer]. My idea to help with moral was a success, but I'm finding that we need more slaves to help pleasure my army. "
" [name] hands you a familiar note, explaining what is needed. You only briefly read it before putting it away. "
" I feel you're going to be a valuable ally to me, [trainer], "[name] explains as she smiles, " and if you can keep up this good work, I can see a grand place for you in my plan for the future. "
"As you leave, you wonder what exactly this future of [name]s is, and what your place in it will be. "
-Is that too long winded? I'm not sure. Also, I assumed some things about how the story will go with this faction. If you think it's not the right direction, let me know. And now, the club!-
Gentlemen's club
1A
Battler says hi to guys.
" As you enter the gentlemens club (should it have a different name? that sounds generic...) You're immediately greeted by the smell of alcohol, and a fainter smell of sex. A small band plays in the back, only barely louder than the general rumble of the rest of the club. A large man, obviously an experienced fighter, meets you before you can get further into the club. "
" Welcome to da [clubname]. Keep outta trouble, and no touchin' da girls until you pay for 'em. Follow da rules, and have a good time. "
" The bouncer gives you a quick smile, and goes about his business his scaring the men into following his rules. "
1B
Battler tells not guys to get lost.
(Again, this goes after the first paragraph )
" Dis clubs for men only. I'm gonna have to ask ya to leave, or do I havta SHOW you da way out? "
" you decide not to anger the brute, and leave the club before you start an incident. "
Quest 1:
Battler wants you to do him a special favor a pair of blondes.
" As you sit at the bar, enjoying the music and drink, the bouncer sits next to you and orders a coffee. "
" The large man smiles as he drinks his brew, and begins talking, " I understand it that your ah trainer, Right? I need a favor, and it's somethin' you can help me with. "
"He sips his coffee before continuing, " I'mma busy guy, and I have alot ah "needs" outside of dis place. You know what I'm sayin? " He smiles though his coffee broth at you " I need some women, blond ones, and they need to be good in bed. If ya help me out, I'll pay ya, and I'll help ya out getting more work around here. We got plenty of "unique" guests, and they could always use ah trainer's talents. Try to be quick, though. My needs build up fast, after all."
"The bouncer leaves after slurping the rest of his coffee, and continues being big and mean looking, keeping the club orderly."
-return without 2 blondes- " As you sit down at a table, the bouncer comes to you with an expectant look on his face. "
" So, you don't got'em yet, eh? " You start to wonder just how much this bouncer knows about you as he continues, " Well I can't say I'm happy about it, but I figure yer a busy guy, so I'll do ma best ta be patient. "
" As the bouncer leaves, he looks back at you with a creepier smile than you've seen before. You decide to leave before his patience runs out. "
-quest complete :2 blondes, each with some amount of sex training:-
" Hey there, [trainer] " the bouncer greets you before you have the chance to find a spot to sit. "
" I hear you got done trainin' them blondes fer me. " the bouncer continues with a smile on his face, " Yeah, I got people watchin' ya, but I don't mean no offense. I just like ta know what's up with my " future investments " if ya get me. "
" You hand the paperwork to the bouncer, who barely looks it over before stuffing it into his pants pocket. "
" I'll have my guy pick'em up, so you don't gotta worry about it. " The bouncer firmly grabs your shoulder, giving a friendly, if not terrifyingly strong shake. He then puts a purse full of gold in your hand."
This is fer your work, kid. Don't think you didn't earn it, either. "
"As he walks away, the Bouncer turns and says, " I'll spread yer name around. Don't be surprised if I got some work fer ya next time you come in. See ya around, kid."
Quest 2:
Battler has a request from a member a pony girl, repeatable.
"The Bouncer greets you at the door, showing you to a booth you believe to be kept just for special guests. He flags a waitress down for you, and sits across the booth, a stupid grin across his face. "
"Thanks for da women. I tell ya, they're GREAT fer stress relieve. " His grin gets bigger, and a bit goofier as well. " My names [name], by da way. I figured you'd want to know mah name, since I got a job for ya already. " The waitress brings your drink, and the bouncer gets a coffee.
"Dis guy, he's ah rich sonovabitch. " [name] snickers as talks, " and his tastes are pretty damn specific. He wants to pay ya get him some of dem ponygirls. Hooves and all. I figured since I owed ya a favor, that I'd tell him you'd do it fer him. He doesn't wanna meet ya, so I'll handle all the talkin' and such. " He finishes his coffee, and begins to rise " I think you an' me are gonna make a good team. Be seein' ya, [slavetrainer]. " [name] walks off, his stupid grin changing to his usual scary look ready to get back to work. "
-return without a ponygirl-
" As you enter [clubname], you're greeted by [name], eager to speak to you. "
"Hey [trainer], I got word you were showin' up. I didn't tell the guy you were showin', though, since you ain't done training that ponygirl yet. "
" You're not sure how to take the fact that [name] seems to know what your doing almost all the time. As you ponder this over your drink, he speaks up before leaving you, " I tell ya, the sooner you get this done, the better off you'd be. Dis guy pays a pretty penny for his slaves, so don't dilly dally. See ya later, [trainer]. "
As [name] goes back to work, you look around, wondering who might be buying these ponygirls. "
-Return with a ponygirl ready-
" You arrive at [clubname] and sit where you normally sit, waving down a waitress and ordering your drink. The first thing you notice is that [name], the bouncer, hasn't greeted you yet. As you begin to worry, a firm hand drops onto your shoulder, gripping and shaking nicely, but with familiar strength. "
"hey [trainer], Heard you were coming, so I told the ponygirl guy his new slave was ready. " As always, [name] ability to know things about your work is uncanny, " I'll give him the ownership papers in a bit, but first... "
" [name] pulls a coin purse from his jacket, placing in front of you. "
"I took my share already, bein' the liason and all. " [name] stands up and before leaving, says to you, " you and me, kid, we're gonna make it big around here. Later, [trainer]. "
-ON repeating pony girl quest -
" You enter [clubname], meeting with [name] the bouncer before ordering anything. "
" Hey there, [trainer], you back fer more work? " [name] doesn't look very surprised when you say yes. "
" Well, turns out our rich ponygirl-loving friend needs more of 'em. " [name] chuckles lightly, then continues, " same deal as before, you train 'em and bring 'em to me, I deliver 'em and we all get what we want. "
" See ya soon, [trainer]. " [name] leaves you at your table and returns to scaring the guests into following the rules. "
" I'll be waitin' here, so go and work yer magic [trainer] so we get paid. "
AND DONE. I think it might too long-winded, but I love making a character, and it's hard to do so in just a few sentences. I look forward to peer review, and I hope this might help you.
EDIT- I added more to the futa stuff. I need to get some sleep now, but I'll finish up the club events when I can. Thanks for reading.
EDIT #2 - Phew. I feel accomplished. I edited the club events, hopefully fleshing them out a bit helps with seeing where I was going with this. I probably made a shit-ton of typos, but I have to get ready for work, so I'll try to get to fixing them up later.
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