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Post by zincat on Jul 8, 2010 10:36:47 GMT -5
Just a few ideas that came to mind while reading the text file. You may already have some of these planned, but just writing them all in case you do not 1) I suppose you plan to write some sort or introduction to the world, the city and the like. If not, it's a must cause it's not really clear what's happening here. From what I can gather, the city is in some sort of always growing forest, and there's a pit from which many kind of creatures come out 2) If I were you, I would keep a pinned thread (with spoilers tag) with all the things you plan to implement in the game, so that you do not keep getting the same questions/suggestions/requests. Also, you can close old suggestion topics if they grow too big and just add the stuff you plan to do to the pinned topic 3) The maid service skill, you wrote it's a general service skill. If it also includes sex, you should maybe do a normal service and a sexual service skill 4) Slave special attacks. You used plural, you mean that a slave can have more than one? If so, should not every one get its own skill? 5) In the intro of the game, point to the forum instead of the blog 6) oopps I was forgetting, advertise on fp and masterbloodfer forums XDDD
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Post by daisy_strike on Jul 8, 2010 17:21:38 GMT -5
Thanks Zincat,
1)Great suggestions, I forgot about an introduction. Will add immediatly.
2)Good plan will do that immediatly as well
3)this is probably the hardest thing to explain with out diagrams but the maid service will be a tree unto itself as will most skills. What your seeing is but the lowest tier.
for Cleaning ->Gardening ->House Cleaning ->Bath Slave
for service ->Sexual Service ->Waiting Service ->Child Care ( I think)
and even these will tree out in the end I think. Its a complicated system and not sure if I will ever get it fully implemented. But the idea is to allow you to make a slave who is a specialist.
4) typo
5) okay
6) Not sure the rules on this and don't want to cause any hard feelings. I think FP will be fine if I put it in the CG and Flash games thread but MB would be dancing on peoples toes I dont want to.
Daisy
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Post by zincat on Jul 8, 2010 17:38:39 GMT -5
Hmm ok, a few more things to discuss then. 3) Ok, I understand. You may want to split the slave statistics screen in 2 then. One part for the skills every slave has, and one for the specific skills. Ofc it's still all work in progress, but I feel it may be clearer that way 5) I did not explain, but the rational here is that you want more people on the forums for suggestions, but reports, etc. Plus the blog is also for the slave maker slaves and such 6) Well, I must admit I do not know the specific rules of those 2 forums. Point is, visibility is still important. If possible, make a thread in those forums. I think leeter said you can do a thread in FP forums. And anyway, put a link and maybe a small image in the signature on both forums, I am sure that is not against the rules
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