To start off a suggestion. It would be nice to have the differential text between one thread and the other, so we don't have to reread it all every time. Or maybe, just you saying which sections you changed form time to time.
Also, damn you, I hate spoilers XD I do not guarantee I'll keep doing this as the game progresses :PP
Finally, good job to slackerfuu, he fixed most of the stuff.
I also wrote in some cases what I think of a few of your choices
.Pulled from the pit at a young age, you spent your time acting as a squire for a guards-woman who saved your life. Learning both the use of many weapons and their maintenance. You are more then ready to train others in the arts of combat. You also have many contacts in the guard that patrol the pit.
.Pulled from the pit at a young age, you spent your time acting as a squire for a guards-woman who saved your life.You learned how to use of many weapons, and how to perform their maintenance. You are more than ready to train others in the arts of combat. You also have many contacts in the guard that patrol the pit.
Lamia's are feared and ostracized by most in " + town() + ", considered one of the monsters that inhabit the pit. You happened to meet this one when she was just a child and being attacked by drunks. Through wit you saved her life. For years now you have been friends and lovers. She is an excellent guard around the house and is feared by all the slaves. She does not like to leave the residence
Lamias are feared and ostracized by most in " + town() + ", considered one of the monster races that inhabit the pit. You happened to meet this one when she was just a child and being attacked by drunks. Through your wits you saved her life. For years now you have been friends and lovers. She is an excellent guard around the house and is feared by all the slaves. She does not like to leave the residence
. The slave's total skill as a maid, combining her cleaning, cooking and service skill. An expert main is a highly prized slave that can help with both pleasing her master, maintaining the home, and helping with child rearing.
. The slave's total skill as a maid, combining her cleaning, cooking and service skill. An expert maid is a highly prized slave that can help with pleasing her master, maintaining the home, and helping with child rearing.
If the girl is a prime or the original version that the dimensional copies are based off. It is said that a prime can alter reality to change fate. They are in high demand from both collectors and religious sects.
Indicates whether or not the girl is a prime or the original version that the dimensional copies are based off. It is said that a prime can alter reality to change fate. They are in high demand from both collectors and religious sects.
Weapon Spot, all the other spots. I would call them slots frankly.
Nipples are not pierced.
The nipples are not pierced.
Ear's not pierced
The ear is not pierced
Walk aound the Pit's Edge, a no mans land constantly patrolled by the guard. It is unsure what you will find that close to the pit, or what might find you.
Walk around the Pit's Edge, a no man's land constantly patrolled by the guard. It is unsure what you will find that close to the pit, or what might find you.
Walk around the Red Light District. Only open in the afternoon and evening, most anything is sold in the red light district from pleasures to the pleasures of the flesh, drugs, and alcohol. The people who call this area home, can be a dangerous lot to the poor, but as long as you have money they are all smiles.
Walk around the Red Light District. Only open in the afternoon and evening, almost anything is sold in the red light district, be it pleasures of the flesh, drugs, alcohol and more exotic... pleasures. The people who call this area home can be a dangerous lot to the poor, but as long as you have money they are all smiles.
Walk around the Main Street of " + town() + ". The trade center of town, for the most part safe as long as you keep a hand on your wallet at all times.";
Walk around the Main Street of " + town() + ". The trade center of " + town() + ", for the most part safe as long as you keep a hand on your wallet at all times.";
Walk around the Green's Edge. For the most part a rather peaceful area that borders the town during the day. Crews of slaves continuously labor here to push back the constant growth. The night is another matter as the things that inhabit the green, mainly escapees from the pit, go searching for food.
Walk around the Green's Edge. For the most part a rather peaceful area that borders the town during the day. Crews of slaves continuously labor here to push back the constant growth. The night is another matter as the things that inhabit the green, mainly escapees from the pit, move around searching for food.
Supervise slave labor Crew Jobs, as your slave works as one of the chain gang. <-- I have no idea what this means, but it kinda sounds wrong, so if you can tell me what it is...
. The slave's skill at cooking. Good food helps to keep the eaters healthy and happy."
. The slave's skill at cooking. Good food helps to keep the residents healthy and happy."
The slave's special attacks. Is their sure kill method.
The slave's special attacks. It is the slave best way to kill (but has other requirements maybe? Just asking... Else we'd only use this all the time XD).
The slave's ability to act like a pig. Only the most hard core trainers specialize in this training as it normally drives a girl insane
The slave's ability to act like a pig. Only the most hardcore trainers specialize in this training as it normally drives a girl insane
My name is " + peopleName(1300) + ", I handle all the live stock taken out of the pit and sold to fund the guardsmen.
My name is " + peopleName(1300) + ", I handle all the livestock taken out of the pit and sold to fund the guardsmen.
We'll since your new I'll give you a few hints for purchasing live stock. First off, you can only bid on one girl per a day, so make sure that the one you bid on is the one you want.
We'll since you are new I'll give you a few hints for purchasing livestock. First off, you can only bid on one girl per a day, so make sure that the one you bid on is the one you want.
Believe it or not, that actually keeps the price lower then making lots of small bids.
Believe it or not, that actually keeps the price lower than making lots of small bids.
This is our home out in the boondocks. Right now not it's much to see. First things first, lets go to the auction house and purchase your first slave.
This is our home out in the boondocks. Right now there isn't much to see. First things first, lets go to the auction house and purchase your first slave.
Even here, fighting back to the green is a constant battle.
Even here, fighting back the green is a constant battle.
Let's head over to the pens now and get your new slave before they start charging us. (It's the pens button, if your blind.)
Let's head over to the pens now and get your new slave before they start charging us. (It's the pens button, if you are blind.)
Go ahead and select the slave, then head back to the house. (Clck on the check box.)
Go ahead and select the slave, then head back to the house. (Click on the check box.)
I moved her into the first room as you can see. So.... now lets go take a look at your new slave's health and skills. (Click on the slave.)
I moved her into the first room as you can see. So.... now let's go take a look at your new slave's health and skills. (Click on the slave.)
Once you have it set up to your prerefernces you won't have to constantly go to the character screen to monitor your slaves.
Once you have it set up to your preferences you won't have to constantly go to the character screen to monitor your slaves.
What? Thats what I thought...
What? That's what I thought...
Hmmph, let me see your license, okay your good. New faces are rare around here, we seem to have the same ones over and over.
Hmmph, let me see your license, okay you are good. New faces are rare around here, we seem to have the same ones over and over.
We'll since your new I'll give you a few hints for purchasing live stock. First off, you can only bid on one girl per a day, so make sure that the one you bid on is the one you want.
We'll since you are new I'll give you a few hints for purchasing livestock. First off, you can only bid on one girl per a day, so make sure that the one you bid on is the one you want.
