First things first, I noticed that the game text file is getting wuite chaotic. I mean, there's some descriptions- then items- then quests- the introduction- then more quests etc...
I think that as the size grows, you'll eventually find it hard to find things and such. Maybe you could somewhat order it a bit, and then make sections so you have all the actions together, all the items together, all the quests together etc.
Now, let's head off to the corrections XD
Why this divine angel has chosen to follow you around is a mystery, and sometimes a rather annoying one. She is more than happy to help in most religious actions, though she will take no part in any evil actions.
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Why this divine angel has chosen to follow you around is a mystery, and sometimes a rather annoying one. She is more than happy to help in most religious actions, though she will take no part in any evil actions. She is, however, quite interested in sex, a thing you would not expect.
The higher a slave's sanity the more rational she is. Slaves with low sanity may begin to act oddly. Slaves with negative sanity will become insane, which may take many different forms
The higher a slave's sanity the more rational she is. Slaves with low sanity may begin to act oddly. Slaves with negative sanity will become insane. Insanity may take many different forms
Sex Training: Lesbian Tribadism. You will teach your slave in the rubbing of pussy against pussy lesbian sex.
Sex Training: Lesbian Tribadism. You will instruct your slave in the rubbing of pussy against pussy lesbian sex.
Effect: Lust less then 50: raises Obedience 1 a day. Lust over 50: Obedience down 1 point a day, Lust up 2 points a day. A slave wearing a chastity belt cannot lose virginity or have sex involving her vagina.
Effect: Lust less than 50: raises Obedience 1 a day. Lust over 50: Obedience down 1 point a day, Lust up 2 points a day. A slave wearing a chastity belt cannot lose her virginity or have sex involving her vagina.
Then licks a red stain on the needle and gives you a smile.
Actually I really like doing piercings. Please stop by; I'm more then happy to pierce you anywhere.
She then licks a red stain on the needle and gives you a smile.
Actually I really like doing piercings. Please stop by; I'm more than happy to pierce you anywhere.
Another rare item, I procured from... Well it's probably not to ask how I got it. Go ahead and click on it. Expendable items always influence the slave in the front.
Another rare item, I procured from... Well it's probably better not to ask how I got it. Go ahead and click on it. Expendable items always influence the slave in the front.
Everything falls into the pit: people, monsters, treasure, garbage, and everything in between. To prevent the more dangerous things in the pit from storming the city, a guard constantly patrols the edge.
Everything falls into the pit: people, monsters, treasure, garbage, and everything in between. To prevent the more dangerous things in the pit from storming the city, the Guard constantly patrols the edge. (I'm considering the guard as an institution here...)
Paid mainly in whatever they remove of value. This includes any people they happen to find, who they promptly sell into slavery: the price of saving their life
The members of the Guard are paid mainly for whatever they find of value. This includes any people they happen to find, who they promptly sell into slavery: the price of saving their life.
On the outskirts of the otherside of " + town() + ", lies another menace, the \"Green\" the jungle that is constantly trying to swallow up " + town() + ". No one knows for certain if the green was there to begin with or something that fell from the pit.
On the outskirts of the other side of " + town() + ", lies another menace, the \"Green\". The \"Green\" is an extremely fast growing jungle that is constantly trying to swallow up " + town() + ". No one knows for certain if the green was there to begin with or something that fell from the pit.
Despite all of the danger, or maybe because of it, the economy is bustling. Led by a royal family, with a king who carved out the city, and a parliament that any native can become elected to. It is up to you to find your own path in this city on the edge of nowhere."
Despite all of the danger, or maybe because of it, the economy is bustling. The city is led by a royal family. The king is the man who carved out the city in this inhospitable place, and there is a parliament that any native can become elected to. It is up to you to find your own path in this city on the edge of nowhere."
W. \ W bad customer. W tip.<--? What is this W in these 3 entries?
Unkown person in charge of guild.
Unknown person in charge of guild.
Searching for treasure? You have to look careful...
Searching for treasure? You have to look carefully...
You and your slave take turns licking each others pussy until you reach orgasm.
You and your slave take turns licking each others' pussy until you reach orgasm.
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