Post by zincat on Jul 8, 2010 10:36:47 GMT -5
Just a few ideas that came to mind while reading the text file. You may already have some of these planned, but just writing them all in case you do not
1) I suppose you plan to write some sort or introduction to the world, the city and the like. If not, it's a must cause it's not really clear what's happening here. From what I can gather, the city is in some sort of always growing forest, and there's a pit from which many kind of creatures come out
2) If I were you, I would keep a pinned thread (with spoilers tag) with all the things you plan to implement in the game, so that you do not keep getting the same questions/suggestions/requests. Also, you can close old suggestion topics if they grow too big and just add the stuff you plan to do to the pinned topic
3) The maid service skill, you wrote it's a general service skill. If it also includes sex, you should maybe do a normal service and a sexual service skill
4) Slave special attacks. You used plural, you mean that a slave can have more than one? If so, should not every one get its own skill?
5) In the intro of the game, point to the forum instead of the blog
6) oopps I was forgetting, advertise on fp and masterbloodfer forums XDDD
1) I suppose you plan to write some sort or introduction to the world, the city and the like. If not, it's a must cause it's not really clear what's happening here. From what I can gather, the city is in some sort of always growing forest, and there's a pit from which many kind of creatures come out
2) If I were you, I would keep a pinned thread (with spoilers tag) with all the things you plan to implement in the game, so that you do not keep getting the same questions/suggestions/requests. Also, you can close old suggestion topics if they grow too big and just add the stuff you plan to do to the pinned topic
3) The maid service skill, you wrote it's a general service skill. If it also includes sex, you should maybe do a normal service and a sexual service skill
4) Slave special attacks. You used plural, you mean that a slave can have more than one? If so, should not every one get its own skill?
5) In the intro of the game, point to the forum instead of the blog
6) oopps I was forgetting, advertise on fp and masterbloodfer forums XDDD
