All the text doesn't show up in-game, so here's what's probly gonna get cut off (took two texts that got cut off, counted the chars, got a number: 287 chars fit in the text box. funky number. blah). Not gonna include what I already mentioned in the bug reports. anyway, I'll just put the sentence that'll probly get cut off, so storyhoppers go right before it.
It doesn't take long for you to climax spraying cum all over her face and hair, and filling her mouth with your jizz.
As you blow your load deep into her mouth, she swallows hard and looks up at you, waiting for your next orders.
She scoops the cum off her face and licks her fingers clean.
As you fish out your dick and slide it between her ass cheeks, she reaches behind herself to guide your shaft directly to her tight hole.
"Yes, Master.\"<br>Dutifully she pulls down your pants, takes your cock in her mouth... and gives you one of the worst blowjobs of your life. Afterwards she looks miserable as you tell her all the things she did wrong, but listens dutifully.
~~Dunno about this one since it has that <br> (does that mean break? dunno what it means or how to read it, but pretty sure it does a new line thing).
"Of course, Master!\"<br>She's enthusiastic, at least, and while she still has hardly any idea of what she's doing, every so often she manages to lick you *just* right, or swallow at *just* the right time, to make her ministrations a bit more enjoyable than a sharp stick in the eye.
~~Same with this one. They'll probly get cut off.
By the time she's feeling better, you've gotten bored, and aren't in the mood any longer.
Moaning throatily with pleasure, she pushes forward, taking the head of your dick in her throat and caressing the underside of your shaft with her tongue.
overwhelmed by sensation, you come in her mouth after only a few minutes, and she pulls back, a thin trickle of come leaking from her mouth, as she proved unable to swallow it all.
~~Should probly make it:
Overwhelmed by sensation, you come in her mouth after only a few minutes, and she pulls back, a thin trickle of come leaking from her mouth, as she proved unable to swallow it all.
~~Not too big a change. The whole thing is:
Obediently, if not eagerly, your slave pulls your dick free of your clothes and takes it between her lips, sucking skillfully, quickly... overwhelmed by sensation, you come in her mouth after only a few minutes, and she pulls back, a thin trickle of come leaking from her mouth, as she proved unable to swallow it all.
When you finally come she swallows your load like it was the finest wine, and as she lifts her head from your crotch she licks her lips eagerly, wordless devotion filling her eyes.
Not just once but several times she sucks your cock, taking you in her throat with ease, teasing and caressing and sucking with the assurance that only a true professional can manage.
~~But here's the whole thing:
You spend hours with your slave, giving her the chance to demonstrate her almost unparalleled skills as a cocksucker. Not just once but several times she sucks your cock, taking you in her throat with ease, teasing and caressing and sucking with the assurance that only a true professional can manage.
With a final thrust you pump cum deep inside of her, reveling in the pleasure of her pussy constricting around your cock, milking it of every last drop of cum.
She spreads her labia and rubs her clit in anticipation of your hard dick and mews with pleasure as you finally make contact.
Your slave sighs her pleasure and asks if you're ready for another round.
After you've finished she sniffles quietly, and takes little comfort from your assurances that it gets better with time.
It hurts her as your cock enters her for the first time, but she does not protest or push you away, and as you start moving atop her her breath catches, pleasure starting to grow as the pain recedes.
By the time you've shot your load inside of her she's even smiling shakily, and you feel secure in the knowledge that she'll learn to love it.
~~Here's that whole block of text:
storyHopper.push("<b>" + peopleName(10) + "</b><br>\"I-if you say so, Master,\" she whispers, bravely parting her legs for you despite her obvious nervousness. It hurts her as your cock enters her for the first time, but she does not protest or push you away, and as you start moving atop her her breath catches, pleasure starting to grow as the pain recedes. By the time you've shot your load inside of her she's even smiling shakily, and you feel secure in the knowledge that she'll learn to love it. )");
~~The end parent before the end quote: don't think that should be there. doesn't look like it's part of the syntax is why.
Her struggles cease as you fuck her, and though she shows no sign of enjoyment, her tight, novice cunt soon has you coming. She'll learn.
Her struggles only cease once you've shot your load, and as you pull out of her and stand, she scowls even more when you tell her that all her fighting just made it better for you.
Her pussy lips are glistening with her arousal as you part her legs, and though she tries not to show it, her low moans and the way her hips rise to meet you show how badly she wants it.
~~Here's all of it:
With a minimum of fuss the slave spreads her legs for you, obediently fucking you... but the results are less than satisfying. She's so wrapped up in how your cock makes *her* feel that she doesn't have the attention to devote to making *you* feel good, the way a proper slave girl should. She writhes beneath you with passion and enthusiasm, but she's got a long ways yet to go.
~~Change:
She's so wrapped up in how your cock makes *her* feel that she doesn't have the attention to devote to making *you* feel good, the way a proper slave girl should.
~~To:
She's so wrapped up in how your cock makes *her* feel that she doesn't have the attention to devote to making *you* feel good, the way a proper slave should.
~~Don't think there's much difference. And the following gets a storyhopper.push in front of it:
She writhes beneath you with passion and enthusiasm, but she's got a long ways yet to go.
~~That or storyhopper.push in front of the sentence I suggested changing.
Devoting her attention to pleasing you, she's able to get you to come in short order, and as you shoot your load inside of her her eyes fairly glow with pride.
Though eager to learn, she keeps getting distracted by her own pleasure and delight, unable to hold back the tides of her own orgasm before you've reached your climax.
Pressing kisses to your neck and shoulders as you piston your hips above her, she answers your cry of pleasure with one of her own, coming hard as you shoot your load inside of her, laying back and whispering \"I love you\" as you pull out.
You reach up to tweak her nipples and she cries out sharply, gasping with pleasure, her pussy gripping your dick tightly, milking you as you fill her womb with your jizz.
When she comes, she comes hard, and the spasms of her sex bring on your own orgasm, your seed filling her.
~~Whole thing is:
Your slave looks delighted when you tell her it's her turn to do all the work, and her body slides over yours as she crawls atop you, her breath catching in her throat before she impales herself on your waiting shaft. Her hips rotate this way and that as she grinds herself against you, her nails lightly raking your chest as she rides your thick cock, and when you cannot stand it any longer and shoot your load inside of her with a cry her own head rolls back, and she screams in delight as her own orgasm washes over her. Gasping for breath she almost collapses atop you, fairly purring in satisfaction.
~~Make it:
Your slave looks delighted when you tell her it's her turn to do all the work, and her body slides over yours as she crawls atop you, her breath catching in her throat before she impales herself on your waiting shaft.
storyhopper Her hips rotate this way and that as she grinds herself against you and her nails lightly rake your chest as she rides your thick cock.
storyhopper When you cannot stand it any longer and shoot your load inside of her with a cry her own head rolls back, and she screams in delight as her own orgasm washes over her. Gasping for breath she almost collapses atop you, fairly purring in satisfaction.
~~Ugh. I feel like I butchered that sentence. Meh. and obviously; storyhopper.push where I put storyhoppers.
A moment's pause, and then she's rising and falling, her breasts bouncing delightfully as she leans back, putting her body on display for you while she rides your shaft.
It's over almost too quickly, her passion and desire keeping her from holding back, and as you fill her womb with your come she cries out joyously.
~~Grammar stuff: maybe make it:
It's over almost too quickly, her passion and desire keep her from holding back and, as you fill her womb with your come, she cries out joyously.
~~but that still sounds awkward. maybe:
It's over almost too quickly, her passion and desire keep her from holding back and she cries out joyously as you fill her womb with your come.
Finally she lowers herself atop you, shivering with delight and anticipation, and starts to slowly, teasingly rock her hips back and forth, feeling you move within her.
She varies her pace, slowing when she feels your cock start to throb, trying to draw the act out for as long as she can, but finally your orgasm will not be denied, and her tight cunt milks you for all you're worth as she leans down to kiss you, giving thanks with her body.
~~GRAH. damn you and your incredibly long sentences dcb.
When you thrust your cock inside of her the walls of her sex grip tightly, and she shudders with excitement and desire; by the time you've finished fucking her you're both covered in sweat and gasping for breath, and her voice is hoarse from her cries of pleasure.
She does everything right - her hips rising and falling to meet your own, her arms wrapped tightly around you, her pussy greedily welcoming your cock's every hard thrust - but her heart isn't in it, and it shows, Even as you're coming, you can't help but feel a little unsatisfied.
~~Change it to:
storyhopper.push She does everything right - her hips rising and falling to meet your own, her arms wrapped tightly around you, her pussy greedily welcoming your cock's every hard thrust - but her heart isn't in it, and it shows.
storyhopper.push Even as you're coming, you can't help but feel a little unsatisfied.
~~I know the first storyhopper is just sorta: there. but there's text before it, so...
She uses every trick she's learned, and she's learned a lot, to make you feel good; her cunt grips your cock tightly, her breasts rub against your chest, she bites at your shoulder to muffle her cries of pleasure.
Finally your own climax overtakes you, and as you fill her with your seed she cries out wordlessly in sheer animal delight.
As you enter your slave's willing, eager pussy she gasps sharply, and soon she's writhing beneath you, her hips rising and falling to meet yours, her breath catching in her throat as climax after climax washes over her, giving herself over entirely to pleasure and desire.
She's trembling with desire from the moment you first touch her, and as you part her wet pussy lips with your cock she cries out, her first orgasm coming even while you're still entering her.
She gives herself over to the desire, the sheer need to be fucked, clinging to you and crying out each time you thrust yourself inside of her, and when you finally come she cries out sharply, wordlessly, and clings to you like a leaf in a high wind...
finally it's over, and still she clutches you, whispering her love for you in a hoarse, soundless voice.
~~But make it:
Finally it's over, and still she clutches you, whispering her love for you in a hoarse, soundless voice.
~~The 'f' wasn't caps 'cause it used to be attached to the previous sentence.
Even after you've come multiple times she knows how to arouse you once more.
You're an experienced and worldly man, but you have difficulty remembering the last time you felt this good, this sated.
There are tears in her eyes as you spill your seed into her bowels, and she lies still even as you leave the room, her defiance shattered under your will.
She's almost *too* tight, and she cries out in pain and anger as you spill your seed within her... but as you pull free of her you can see the glistening juices of her pussy, betraying the way her struggles excited her.
Once you've shot your load in her ass, she shudders as you pull your cock free, her ass still gaping invitingly.
Try as you might, you can't get her to relax her sphincter, meaning you have to push a lot harder and more forcefully than you might have liked; by the time you're filling her ass with your spunk, she's trying valiantly not to cry.
She promises, though, to try and do better next time...
She'll have to learn to relax her muscles and not squeeze you quite so uncomfortably, but once you start moving your hips and really fucking her she cries out softly, clearly learning to enjoy the sensation, and she welcomes your hot come eagerly.
She still hasn't learned to truly enjoy the sensation of your cock in her ass, but she's not struggling or crying anymore, and when you come inside of her she gasps with pleasure.
Still she looks pained and uncomfortable, and just lies there as you fuck her; finally you manage to come, and scold your slave for her lackluster performance.
The effort is paying off, as the way she moans and rocks back against you show that she's learning to enjoy the sensation of being fucked in the behind; she reaches down to caress the lips of her pussy as you fuck her, and when you come she plunges two fingers into her sex, crying out with a climax of her own.
~~But even that probly won't fit. So:
storyhopper The effort is paying off, as the way she moans and rocks back against you show that she's learning to enjoy the sensation of being fucked in the behind.
storyhopper She reaches down to caress the lips of her pussy as you fuck her, and when you come she plunges two fingers into her sex, crying out with a climax of her own.
As you push your cock inside of her you can't help but groan, and she rocks back against you; if she hasn't learned to enjoy herself, she's at least learned to make sure *you* enjoy it.
She groans as your cock enters her ass, eagerly accepting your shaft, and rocks back against you as you fuck her, groaning with pleasure all the while, reaching back to play with herself as you piston your hips back and forth, pushing her forward with each powerful thrust.
As you come she climaxes with you, your voices mingling as you shoot your load inside her.
She groans with pleasure, rocking back against you, and when you come her butt clamps down on you, milking every drop of hot come from your dick.
She comes twice before you shoot your load, and as you're pulling out she looks back over her shoulder at you, grinning a Cheshire cat grin.
She cries out sharply as you come, her voice muffled as she presses her face into a pillow, and she looks back at you proudly as you pull out, secure in the knowledge that she has done well.
She comes even before she has a chance to reach down and rub her clit, and twice more before you've finished, occasionally crying out how much she loves getting fucked in the ass.
She's inordinately proud of her anal sex skills, and gives every appearance of loving being fucked in the ass.
She almost won't let you go once you've come, trying to coax you back to hardness again, an before you go she thanks you for showing her how lovely anal sex can be.
~~And change it to:
She almost won't let you go once you've come, trying to coax you back to hardness again, and before you go she thanks you for showing her how lovely anal sex can be.
~~No 'd' at the end of 'and'
I'll continue later. Daisy: if you tell me to, I'll try to put storyhopper.push's/ (<br>'s and ); in. otherwise, I'll continue how I have been